Wordy Sentences
Adam Smith and Modern Economy.
Adam Smith wrote the first complete study of political economy. Smith`s book, The Wealth of Nations, pointed out and directed attention to economical and political interdependences. Conservative business people considered him to be an excellent businessman and a pioneer of its generation; on the other hand, Liberals believed his ideas left out of market to average citizens. His theories made him to be considered as a controversial man in economical practices.
HiDi...! You have a good management avoiding wordy sentences. I consider that you keep the main points aobut Adam Smith paragraph.
ResponderEliminarDear Ligia,
ResponderEliminarI think you omitted the information about the Independence of the USA, in this case it's important as it shows some irony.
Very good.